Your Reign is at an End

[Yaoiboy]

OK this is totally a work in progress, but I'm gonna pull a Palpatine and put my half finished deathstar out in the open.


Checkmate
End Game
the play is done
the curtain falls
there shall be no encore
the passion burned to ashe
against my skin.

take this black labyrinth
of love from before me
and burn the bush of my desire.

Crucify my lust
and shackle the hand
that reaches to you.

Close the gate
seal the doors
of my ragged heart
so that I might heal.

[Groks]

Whoa....you're so good with images. I know, I'm supposed to come up with something more than just saying "it was good", but it really was. ;D

You say this is half finished? In my own humble opinion, I think it could stand on it's own.

Was the death star functioning at all in the first movies? I know it was half finished in being rebuilt in "Return of the Jedi".

[Yaoiboy]

Your right this could stand on its own but I want it to be the most grand thing I've ever written.
that and its my last poem to the "Dragon".