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Post by Yaoiboy on Aug 21, 2008 15:46:23 GMT -6
Chained to the glorious sun baking in the light of love but too soon too fast as Icarus flew
The soul burns in the light of sun so hot too hot
The manacles unlatch he falls a ragged blackened soul too wander forever the darkness deep silent complete
A light
Is it the sun returned to him
no
softer gentler the light of moon Selena Artemis
The spirit stirs Ragged and torn Broke and forlorn
The moon takes him to her arms holds him tightly to her breast takes his tears heals his wounds
and swears revenge upon the sun
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Post by Yaoiboy on Aug 21, 2008 15:48:05 GMT -6
That was extremely draining.
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Post by Groks on Aug 22, 2008 8:25:19 GMT -6
That was extremely draining. I just noticed, you haven't posted any of your own poetry since school was in session last May. And now school has started, and you're brilliant again. Is there a pattern emerging here??? I very much liked the poem, found the images from Greek and Japanese mythology interesting. I could see how that might be draining.
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