Post by Groks on Jul 9, 2008 11:00:05 GMT -6
Mr. Yaoiboy....sorry I haven't replied until now....I was tired last night and this morning I had to see my psychologist. I know...excuses, excuses. Of course after talking last night, you know I really liked this. If I'm laughing or crying or yelling "oh my freakin' gosh!" in the bedroom with my handheld ( 
, you know it's good.
I saw the additions this morning....you know you're trying to push my limits, don't you? ;D Yes, I'm going to come down on you in your fantasy with the unbuttoning the pants thing.......not only am I going to make you cut out that part, but (in my humble opinion) you could have teased your audience a bit more with more innocent stuff ( you know, flirting, first kiss, etc.). Do you kind of know what I mean?
But yeah....I did like it. You are awesome writing stuff in first person.
, you know it's good. I saw the additions this morning....you know you're trying to push my limits, don't you? ;D Yes, I'm going to come down on you in your fantasy with the unbuttoning the pants thing.......not only am I going to make you cut out that part, but (in my humble opinion) you could have teased your audience a bit more with more innocent stuff ( you know, flirting, first kiss, etc.). Do you kind of know what I mean?
But yeah....I did like it. You are awesome writing stuff in first person.
