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Post by Yaoiboy on Jun 19, 2008 22:29:08 GMT -6
Mmm'K we had to wright this for class, it was supposed to be about something important or some crap like that... I was not happy with myself. Just so everyone knows, so you don't think I'm Dr. Suess, a trisagion is a hymn that praises god for being thrice holy, so this is my trisagion praising my three greatest personality traits, and there patron demon.
The Black Trisagion Envy Lust Wrath
Leviathan Monster of the sea The foaming sea The great green sea Of mans want For the haves of another
Asmodai Lord of the life-drinkers King of twisted tangled sheets Master of mans wants The primal need To revel in the flesh of another
Satan God of blood-red fields Flashing blades Screaming voices The soaked fields Of mans mortal duel
These three one last That I must tell
I am legion For we are many
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Post by Haunted_Broken_Wings on Jun 19, 2008 23:19:02 GMT -6
Very good. Bravo! ;D
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Post by Groks on Jun 22, 2008 16:45:42 GMT -6
Yaoiboy....I always have a hard time telling you how I appreciate your work, I mean, how many times can I say "good images" or "awesome". I guess for now, even though this poem was rather dark, I was rather impressed...whatever demons possessed you that day, your metaphors and visuals were still "awesome". This was a project for school? What did your teacher say?? ;D
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Post by Yaoiboy on Jul 19, 2008 23:43:55 GMT -6
Yeah it was, Actually my teacher said nothing special about it... I think thats why, in the beginning, I had trouble with sharing my work, nobody told me it was good, so I never thought it was.
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Post by Groks on Jul 22, 2008 8:31:34 GMT -6
Them bastards!!!
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