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Post by Haunted_Broken_Wings on Jun 19, 2008 12:49:02 GMT -6
When I am weak You are strong When I fall down You are there to pick me up In your arms I feel safe In your arms I could stay forever When you are near me Everything wrong turns right When you are near me My heart begins to race I lay on your chest And as you hold me I hear your heart beating And I feel mine Beating in time with yours Like a metronome of life Laying here with you I feel your muscles They are tense Ii know I am safe no matter what the world brings I will always be with you No matter what happens I will always love you
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Post by Groks on Jun 19, 2008 17:19:00 GMT -6
I like your use of imagery here...I hope to see more like this.
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Post by Haunted_Broken_Wings on Jun 19, 2008 18:55:16 GMT -6
A lot of people like that part of the poem as well.
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