Nine of Spades
New Member
Come what may, I will love you until my dying day.
Posts: 36
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Hollow
Jun 16, 2008 19:21:00 GMT -6
Post by Nine of Spades on Jun 16, 2008 19:21:00 GMT -6
Your love for me, It beats no longer See how you tore my heart asunder? Yet still my heart, it longs for you, The one who pulls me under. I cast away my hopeless dreams To see a new tomorrow Yet still my soul it hides away, Still in eternal sorrow. And so my love I part from you now, I know you will not follow. For we both know the horrid truth That your heart is truly hollow.
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Hollow
Jun 17, 2008 8:40:52 GMT -6
Post by Groks on Jun 17, 2008 8:40:52 GMT -6
Good use of Iambic Pentameter.
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Hollow
Jun 19, 2008 14:01:13 GMT -6
Post by Haunted_Broken_Wings on Jun 19, 2008 14:01:13 GMT -6
I like it hun. I do
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